徐光福 发表于 2006-3-18 08:33

&nbsp;<P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">竹影扫阶尘不动----上联</SPAN></B><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: red; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體"><?xml:namespace prefix = o ns = "urn:schemas-microsoft-com:office:office" /><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: fuchsia; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">月穿潭底水无痕----原对</SPAN></B><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: fuchsia; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: #ff9900; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">月光穿潭水无痕----修改,虽字对仗更工整,但似不如原句</SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN">以下三句是我对的,请辩析:</SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">竹影扫阶尘不动==</SPAN>松声弹琴铉自直</SPAN></B><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></P><P class=MsoNormal><FONT size=4><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">竹影扫阶尘不动==</SPAN>松声吹笛膜自平</SPAN></B><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-fareast-font-family: 新細明體"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></FONT></P><P class=MsoNormal><FONT size=4><B><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><SPAN lang=ZH-CN style="FONT-SIZE: 18pt; COLOR: blue; FONT-FAMILY: SimSun; mso-font-kerning: 1.0pt; mso-bidi-font-family: &#39;Times New Roman&#39;; mso-ansi-language: EN-US; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN; mso-bidi-language: AR-SA">竹影扫阶尘不动==</SPAN>松声惊僧心自明</SPAN></B><B><SPAN lang=EN-US style="COLOR: #ccffcc; mso-fareast-language: ZH-CN"><o:p></o:p></SPAN></B></FONT></P>

徐光福 发表于 2006-3-20 22:19

<BLOCKQUOTE><STRONG>引用</STRONG>：<HR>原文由 <B>徐宗民</B> 发表于 <I>2006-3-17 19:45:16</I> :<BR><P>大家以为这个如何？</P><P><SPAN id=yu34303><SPAN id=yu33920><FONT face=幼圆 color=#0000ff size=4>竹影扫街尘未动 ==<BR>漏定读诗思无邪<BR></FONT></SPAN></SPAN></P><HR></BLOCKQUOTE><P><FONT color=#3300ff size=3><STRONG>宗民前辈对了很多下句,都很不错,都有很高的意境,不过这句,我觉得比较不好理解,太高深了,"漏定"好象是佛教语,不好理解,"思无邪",是&lt;诗经&gt;里的,一般人好象也不易理解.我等毕竟不是道佛专业人士,不敢妄加评断,此孤陋寡闻之见,请勿见笑."</STRONG></FONT><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>漏定读诗思无邪"意境和上句联为一体,很妙,这样的句子,如没有深奥的学问和深邃的思想,一般人是想不出来的.</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>如有时间,请宗民前辈解释这对的意思,以助我等提高!同时请再指出我对的以下几联之不足:</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>竹影扫阶尘不动==</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>柳荫遮身心自明</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>松声惊僧心自宁</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>清风弹琴铉无音</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3></FONT></STRONG>&nbsp;</P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3></FONT></STRONG>&nbsp;</P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#ff0000 size=5></FONT></STRONG>&nbsp;</P>

徐小安 发表于 2006-3-21 02:08

<FONT size=5>此对的上联本来就含有禅机，因此下联若能往这上面靠自然是最好不过的了。我想这也是宗民唯独赞赏</FONT><FONT color=#3300ff size=3><STRONG>松声惊僧心自宁<FONT color=#000000>&nbsp; 的原因吧？</FONT></STRONG></FONT>

徐久长 发表于 2006-3-23 03:03

<P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3><FONT color=#ff0033>松声惊僧心</FONT>自宁&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>柳<FONT color=#ff0033>荫遮身心</FONT>自明&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; <STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3><FONT color=#ff0033>清风弹琴</FONT>铉无音</FONT></STRONG></P></FONT></STRONG></FONT></STRONG><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>意境不错，有点禅机。</FONT></STRONG></P><P><STRONG><FONT color=#3300ff size=3>红色几字皆平，三连平就有点犯忌。</FONT></STRONG></P>

徐康 发表于 2006-3-23 05:12

<P>戏为一对:</P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#0000ff size=6>竹影扫阶尘未动</FONT></P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#0000ff size=6>松声浸耳心自宁</FONT></P>

徐康 发表于 2006-3-25 05:13

<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 size=5>年本老师戏对之联</FONT></P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 size=5>只改数字</FONT></P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 size=5>则又是另一种心境</FONT></P>

徐久长 发表于 2006-3-29 07:47

<P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#0000ff size=6>竹影扫阶尘未动</FONT></P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#0000ff size=6>松涛洗耳意难平</FONT></P><P><FONT face=楷体_GB2312 color=#0000ff size=6>有禅机，有意境，好联！</FONT></P>

徐锦辉 发表于 2007-12-4 15:45

我来试对一对：


竹影扫阶尘不动
葵荫摆扇人无感

徐四月十八 发表于 2007-12-11 20:37

徐久长 发表于 2008-1-26 07:33

日本著名佛教领袖，京都清水寺大西良庆长老，在他108岁圆寂前十天，为清水寺大讲堂预写楹联，只写了“风光千里来”的上联，下联嘱咐弟子等赵朴初居士来寺时再续对。后来赵朴初到清水寺，亲自对了“妙法一音演”的下联。在此之前的1982年，赵朴初曾奉大西良庆长老之意对过一个上联“竹影扫阶尘不动”，长老的下联是“月穿潭底水无痕”。
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