徐德勤 发表于 2009-5-29 09:27

采桑子.端阳

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徐焕友 发表于 2009-5-29 09:54

迟了一步，昨天发上来更合适、、、、:loveliness:

徐为国 发表于 2009-5-29 11:15

不懂词律，但意境很好，欣赏:victory:

徐德勤 发表于 2009-5-30 14:27

宗亲不需客气，是否我的词不合律啊？

徐焕友 发表于 2009-5-30 17:58

回复 4楼 徐德勤 的帖子

是我们水平有限、、、

徐世琼 发表于 2009-6-19 16:14

写得很好，惟最后一句当为：仄仄平平仄仄平。
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